My New game concept

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wayan madman
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Nov 12, 2015, 4:49:40 AM via Website

Please help me to test and review my new 3D Android game!! need more input....
key game goal simple , addictive and practice
here is the link:

go to google play store... type "bali justice ball" from S2Team.

Sorry cannot give you link directly the system avoid that , because i am new here..but i really need help

thank you very much ..for you all:D

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dev ncow
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Dec 1, 2015, 11:04:46 AM via Website

Hello,

Thanks for sharing. Good game !

Did you use Unity to make this game ?

Regards,

wayan madman

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dev ncow
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Dec 1, 2015, 11:08:25 AM via Website

Hello again,

I suggest you to add a post to this sub-forum to let know your app : androitpit / Let me show you my app...

Regards,

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wayan madman
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Dec 1, 2015, 1:12:50 PM via Website

yes, i do. this is my first game on Unity

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nilofar shaikh
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Dec 1, 2015, 4:00:11 PM via Website

Nice game, but improve its graphics more, it would make it more interesting to play.

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wayan madman

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Balint Farago
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Dec 5, 2015, 5:32:35 PM via Website

Hi man,

I don't want to be rude but your game is ugly. It is really ugly. I would never play with it. Though here are some recommendations:

  • Speed up the video. I waited 20 seconds till I saw the game. Your users don't have so much time while there are a billion apps to select from. Also, the video is really slow. If users see that, do you think they will think 'Oh, I see that the video is slow, but the game must be fast. The poor developer has a slow computer and this is why he couldn't record the gameplay appropriately'. I think they'll say 'Why is that so slow? Maybe the game is that slow too! Moving on..'
  • In the first paragraph you state that the game is based on a traditional game called 'Bola Adil'. No one knows it so your are wasting valuable space. People read mainly the first paragraph. If you don't catch them with that then they're gone.
  • Focus on the title. Remove 'Bali' because it only adds clutter. The more words your title have the lower your app will rank for those words.

My 2 cents.

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